What makes me mad?

The things that make me mad are?

1 People who put others down and don't show respect.
2 When someone is cruel to a person or an animal.
3 When someone is disrespectful to others or its being racist.
4 When someone is innocent and its blame for no reason instead of blaming the real person.
5 Someone who asks many questions for reasons that are not important.
6 When other people make someone else look bad or try to embarrased them.
7 When someone messes with someone I care for or try to hurt them.
8 When people are unfair with others for no reason.
9 When people try to mess with personal things or belongings.
10 when I get blame for something that I didn't do.

Who do I admire?

___My Father and Mother____________ are the ones I admire because they have taugh me many life lesson since my childhood and they have always been there for me. My Mom and Dad are the persons who I admire most because they have always been tere for me, Cheer me up when something goes wrong and they care about me. I admire them because they teach me things that will help me in life and give me support to continue with my studies and my life goals. I admire them the most because they are very important in my life.

What do I want

In life I want to accomplish my goals that I have and be able to enjoy life without worries and have the best time there is. I want to make my family pround and enjoy my life with the people a care for and be able to do many extraordinary things. Accomplishing my goals is my life maintpoint because I want to have a great life and enjoy it with everyone.

Who Am I

Who am I? well my name is Oscar, im 18 years old and im a senior at Steinmetz High school. I would describe myself as a good person who can be trusted and cool to hang around. Meeting new people is what I like to do and hanging aroung with friends is the best way to spent time. Im an outgoing person and a responsible one too. I like to spent time with my family and learning about new things that i didn't know before. I would describe myself in this ways because its who I am and i wouldn't change it for anything.

March 11 2011

Skim start time: 11:44 amSkim

end time: 11:55 am

An article I read beginning to end is 'Killer could face death again'by Jason Meisner about a man who's been on death row twice in Illinois for murder, and is now facing the same fate in California.

A few lines from from the story:

"Convicted serial killer Andrew Urdiales has twice been put on death row in Illinois, only to have his sentence commuted to life in prison without parole, first by Gov. George Ryan in 2003 and then again Wednesday when Gov. Pat Quinn signed the law abolishing the death penalty."

"Urdiales confessed to Chicago police in 1997, admitting he killed eight women in all, authorities have said."

My response:

I think he deserves life in prison wothout parol since he wont be sentence to death penalty.

2011, #3: Writing the summary lead and tie-in quote

By Oscar

Hugh Hefner has become interested in helping the Steinmetz Stars by letting Ms. Sharon Schmidt know he will support the stars in the things they need. Some students suggest using the money to get Ipads and other electronics to make the newspaper more easy to do and help facilitate the work.

"I believe it should be use to buy new printers to make the newspaper look better and use the money to buy new equipment to make the work more easier and fun to do," Oscar Z. said.

2011, #1: Chapter 6 vocab

inverted pyramid-- a style of newswriting in which the most important facts go on top and the leats important go on the bottom.

lead-- the first paragraph of a story.

question lead-- is a lead that begins with a question.

quote lead-- is a lead that begins with an unattributed quote.

summary lead-- a lead that gives information about the major facts of a story in the first sentence.

tease-- use a lead that will make readers want to read more.```